Wow. This is awesome! Nice work.

Hmm. This is a good start. I feel like it needs to better express the feeling of being a squishy human, being ground up in the relentless and uncompromising gears of the machine. Maybe throw some gears lubricated with blood on that badboy…

Oh. Yeah that makes sense. I forgot about that saying. Reads awkwardly though when they re-arrange it like that…

Wtf does “as path paves forward” mean?