But no pun in ten did.

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    22 days ago

    I got the joke, in fact I knew the joke. The problem here is that nowhere does it set up the “no pun did WIN”.

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      22 days ago

      Are you an english speaker at home?

      This grammar is very readable to me.

      In the first sentence (title) they said they send poems for the goal of having a winner. The second sentence builds upon that.

      I dont think this format is very unusual.

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        22 days ago

        “I sent in 10 jokes in hopes of having a winner. No pun in ten did (have a winner(??)).”

        “I sent in 10 jokes in hopes of one winning. No pun in ten did (win).”

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          22 days ago

          Having looked it up, you are technicly correct.

          It does feel like a very minor imprecision though, especially in a pun community on the internet where half the people dont speak english as a first language.

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            22 days ago

            The entire point is the wordplay though.

            “I want to be cremated as it is my last hope for a smoking hot body.”

            vs

            “I want to be cremated as it is my last hope to be sexy.”

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              22 days ago

              Now i really owe you a apology

              Because i only now realize the second layer that “no pun in ten did” was the winning pun. Right?

              Its still somewhat funny without that dept and i got caught on that.

              I dont think op knew this themselves but i very much understand your point now. I recall an experience myself where i knew a joke well and then heared half of that joke. Yeah i get it now.

              Thanks for your pantience.

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        22 days ago

        I get the joke, I knew the joke before. I am saying this is a bad telling of the joke.